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Three sequential editing passes for high-polish outputs

For outputs requiring high polish, structure editing as three sequential passes—structural edit (organization), line edit (sentence clarity), copy edit (mechanics)—to prevent simultaneous optimization across incompatible dimensions.

When This Fires

  • When editing any high-stakes or long-form output (reports, articles, proposals, presentations)
  • When editing feels overwhelming because there's "too much to fix"
  • When you've been editing for an hour and the piece doesn't feel better despite the effort
  • Complements Separate creation and editing into different calendar… (creation-editing separation) with the internal structure of the editing phase

Common Failure Mode

The everything-at-once edit: reading through once while simultaneously fixing typos, restructuring paragraphs, rewriting sentences, and questioning the argument. Each concern competes for attention, nothing gets thorough treatment, and the editor ends the session feeling like the piece is "somewhat better" without any dimension being systematically addressed.

The Protocol

(1) Pass 1 — Structural edit: Read the entire piece focusing only on organization. Mark sections to move, combine, or cut. Don't fix any sentences. Output: restructured outline or document with sections in final order. (2) Pass 2 — Line edit: Read each paragraph focusing on sentence clarity, transitions, and tone. Rewrite unclear sentences, smooth transitions, eliminate redundancy. Don't fix mechanics. Output: clear, well-flowing prose. (3) Pass 3 — Copy edit: Read for spelling, grammar, punctuation, formatting, and consistency. This is mechanical and should feel like a different task than the previous two passes. Output: polished, error-free final version. (4) Each pass should be a separate reading of the entire document, not three things done in one reading. (5) For outputs not requiring high polish (Default pass policies by output type), a single pass combining all three may be sufficient. Reserve three-pass editing for work that represents you to external audiences.